Wednesday, June 13, 2007

"If One could Hold Time........"

If time and situations go hand in hand
Nobody will find mysteries on this land

When time permits, the situations fail to support
And when situations favor, time is lost to hold

Wise is a man who holds situations at the right time
Wise is a man who holds people at the right time

Life keeps going…….leaving Ifs and Buts
There is no turning back to the broken knots

Care for the people before they are gone
Seldom have we realized importance, once they have come

If time and tide could wait for one
One would have got everything done

If time and situations go hand in hand
Nothing will go wrong on this land.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

I didn’t knew before tht u r such a gud writer..
Beautiful lines..Gud work Mitali :-)

Mitali Bansal said...

Thanks Vinit...so now u got ur answer about my email id...but I would also like u to comment on the views in the poem....!!!

vinit said...

Hey Mitali.. u r not only CREATIVE but also have a very gud memory..u remember the thing which I have asked long time back :-)
N I think m also a very wise person as according to u "Wise is a man who holds people at the right time" Hope u got wht i wanna say...Keep writing..

Anonymous said...

wise is a man who create situation at right time

wise is a man who make people at right time

he will rule this kingdom

who will rose above wisdom

Rachit said...

Very well written...you have a natural flair for writing...keep writing your beautiful poems..one day we'll get them published and who knows you might be another John Milton or William Wordsworth!!

Bajaj... words are all i have said...

this is my favorite one... simple and straight frm heart...

Mitali Bansal said...

My fav too...

Anonymous said...

Hey Mithu, I never knew tat u r such a masterpiece.. great work.. keep doin , as our fren said we will get published one day.. n for sure ur creativity will be rewarded..

Mitali Bansal said...

Thanks Baski :))