On a sea shore
Sitting in the moon light
In the comforts of his arms
Silence all around
Just the waves and its sound
That’s all in a
Wonderful night out…!!!
Sitting in the moon light
In the comforts of his arms
Silence all around
Just the waves and its sound
That’s all in a
Wonderful night out…!!!
11 comments:
So romantic!!!
Reading this was really making me feel of those moments which I had and i would share with someone special in my life.
These 4-6 lines written with so simple words but full of feelings.
great going mam.....
take care,
Rahul
Thanks Rahul...So u already had such experience...hmmm
No need to complement the romanticisim of the prose ... but what i would like to mention here is the effectivness with which you have used the words ...
i am just wondering girls were never so much simple (the long drives, roof top dineers, movies and much more) he he he :)
Thanks GG, :)
wow very beautiful and romantic...
reminded me of my college days ..
ab to chand neekalta he nahi :P
Desh Mein Nikla Hoga Chand... :P
Catch...if u can !!!
hum to hain pardesh mai
desh mai neekala hoga chand
apni raat ke chat pe kitana
tanha hoga chand :P
On a sea shore,
sitting in the moon light,
In the comforts of her arms,
in the silence of her cry,
gaze of the heavens staring at us in our eyes,
she counting stars and i counting the time,
how much night is gone what she asks, i answer how much is left behind......
O night don go, plz don go, let it be night all the time.....
Thats my version dear of my night time...
Hey Gurpreet good one, but I wonder why would she cry and count the stars on such a wonderful night...? lolz :)
undoubtly thats awesome :)
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